Microblog: Slenderman

I think one of the strongest enhancements to this story was the point of view. In the beginning it was being told from the third person of what was happening to Lindsay. Then, once it all got more intense and the "monster" came closer the perspective switched from focused on Lindsay to her sister Nicole at the hospital the next morning. When this happened it made the feeling go from fearful to confused. The reader is left without knowing what happened after the monster got to Lindsay and why she has these head wounds. I think an interesting addition to this would be from Slenderman's POV.